Questions and observations.
The composition is fantastic, but the instruments
First off, what genre is this supposed to be? It sounds like it's supposed to be hardstyle. If that's the case, see about getting a better kick/bass combination. I have a kick/bass grouping that I borrowed from Exnotic if you want it.
Second, see about making an extended cut to this song. I'm doing some small-scale freelance DJing, and I'd love to throw this song into a mix. A perfect structure would be...
Drum intro>synth/chord intros>breakdown>climax>Optional outro
4/5. I'd love to see the finished product.