Hello there.
I've been following your music for a few months now, and I'm also a friend of yours on YouTube. If you can recognize me by anything, it's the fact that I tend to cook-and-grill producers that submit to the portal. I'm almost apologetic for my high standards. = P
Speaking of which, I have to complain about the chord structure. One problem is that I find it quirky, but I've been bitten in the butt for incorporating sole opinions into my reviews, so I'll say "to each his own" on that matter. However, 2:44 needs to be a slightly different chord setup. This is the emotional finale to the track, and it needs a little bit of variation, if not tension in some of the chords. It'll keep the song interesting and will give listeners the (relatively speaking) tear-jerking finale they're looking for.
Do you listen to hardstyle often? If so, you can understand how the final climax (or drop) often incorporates slight chord changes or new harmonies. The best example I can think of at the moment is "My Life" by the up-and-coming producer, Gauntlets. It incorporates the new harmony in the final climax, pushing the audience over the emotional edge, creating that ideal experience. You should be able to find him on YouTube, but if you need an mp3, go ahead and contact me.
This might be a small detail, but working out the smaller details makes the bigger parts all the better.