No offense to him...
...but ignore CigarJacketMan. Auto-tune can be used aesthetically, not as a way to cover up for lack of singing ability, which he doesn't seem to understand (among many others that think this way).
Anyway, interesting take on the song. Still, I don't think electro was the proper genre. Try happy hardcore/bouncy techno out and see what happens. It leaves much more room for heavy instrumentation and, if done properly, can be anthemic. Listen to the likes of Scott Brown, Hixxy, and Brisk and Ham for the vibe that I'm looking for. If you like it, go for it and send me a message when out. If not, keep making music anyway.
4/5